Get Your Premium Membership

Cause of Death

walking around
shrouded in darkness
her mind filled with lies
on the outside she held a smile
as if everything were alright
but she felt trapped
because on the inside
she was screaming
but she couldn't be heard
an inner turmoil burned
burned her alive like the flames of hell
she struggled day by day
hour by hour
minute by minute
until the day comes
she locks herself away in her bedroom
no tears fall
as she gave her life away
to that evil angel that awaited her
the sadest thing is....
nobody cared.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/8/2011 7:27:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Bianca. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/6/2011 8:58:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u share words with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 6/6/2011 2:57:00 PM
YOu have penned your expressions so well on cause of death, Bianca
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things