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Bobby May's Contest
Flirt With Me - Monoku

25th August 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Deepa Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Woah...cool monoku.. Congratulations on your wonderful win.:-) Keep inspiring ..Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
Ermine Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 8:24 PM
No way, and no way to both. Thanks my dear, V.
Deepa Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:36 AM
Oh my goodness... Your such a genius.. Writing poetry wherever and whenever you desire..:-) Pray ...you to become courageous.. and now leaving it for you to decide whether you want the client to know about it ;-)
Ermine Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:11 AM
Thank you, Deepa.... Now will I have the courage to say it to the client whose toilet I was sitting on (lid closed) while supposed to be cleaning it, writing this...?
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 3:35 AM
Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Warm regards, Rama
Ermine Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:08 AM
Thank you, dear Rama
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 2:51 AM
- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Ermine Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:09 AM
Thanks! Rest your typing fingers, Anne - Lise.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:42 AM
Ah! Somebody is stuck in his thoughts, Sigrid, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 7:19 PM
Great Monoku,Sigrid , congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
Kauffman Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 5:06 PM
What can one say about heavenly perfection. You summed up covenant history in sixteen syllables! Really nice, Sigrid! Congratulations!
Watt Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:03 PM
That line will get him thinking... Congrats on your win, Sigrid ~ John
May Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 3:48 PM
Congratulations on your placement Sigrid! Great Job my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 2:31 PM
Very nice, Sigrid! and it sure says a lot!
Ermine Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 3:48 PM
There's some totally cool lines in this group which I intend to collect!
Kerr Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 1:43 AM
Hi Sigrid, I’m impressed by this nuanced, intelligent Monoku. velvet bloom crystal colour issue Thanks for soup mail visit and review. Velvet is the colour which must be included in contest entry as it is one of the qualifying conditions. The requisite colour would have to be very visual such as red, purple or velvet. Crystal can be a colour but has a lesser impact. A rock with geometric features can be a crystal. Hope this sheds light on the matter Howard
Ermine Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 2:39 AM
No worries, Howard. I'm happy to have learnt of the goblin, excuse if I was too nosey.
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 12:59 AM
- Lovely line, Sigrid :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ermine Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 2:43 AM
Cheers! Many Blessings, SS
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