02/18/25
I dived into the cauldron of Magic Potion and....
Third Place
Contest by Anoucheka Gangabisoon
You just walked away giving sudden shock . My emotive urges were choked being blocked, Entrance of my consciousness was closed and locked. I dived into the cauldron of Magic Potion , swimming and sinking in vague hazy notion. Between conscious and subconscious state I was neither to believe nor to accept, actually you didn't look back even, but left. I dived into the cauldron of Magic Potion wishing intensity on dilution Woke up from dreamy dormant drowsy desire Me almost shattered losing you for ever. ‘There was no chance of your return’, I was clear. I dived into the cauldron of Magic Potion and again to gain burning sensation. Magic potion didn’t work giving me relief. Took a chance being unaware of belief. Pain persisting on humiliation and grief. I dived into the cauldron of Magic Potion and all in vain ! No recovery action.
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