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Caught In the Smoke

Quiet sigh no one hears Nothings stay very clear Make a move to get near And I’ll run from you Forget now for later The worry grows greater I slip down the crater And I’ll remember you But you do not see me Like you used to see me The hole is too steamy And I’ll scream for you Search around for my side Let my voice be your guide Billowed smoke will subside And you’ll see me and you Again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/19/2009 11:51:00 PM
Nice work and great ending. The metaphor of smoke is nice...Raul
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