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Caught In Between

fire wild, torrid crackling, consuming, liberating passion, heat, chill, frost freezing, seizing, imprisoning solid, compact ice Submitted on September 18, 2018 for contest MID SEPTEMBER 2018 PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on May 1, 2018

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/2/2018 10:48:00 PM

Fire and Ice. Wow! I wish I'd have thought of this; I AM the pyromaniac here afterall!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/2/2018 11:11:00 PM

LOL Keep the first and last lines and create your own poem, Caren.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/2/2018 4:47:00 PM

Excellent, Line. Full marks to you! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/2/2018 9:28:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul. Most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2018 6:10:00 PM

This kind of poem deserves a very good contrast, and that's what you delivered!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/1/2018 10:08:00 PM

Awesome. Most appreciated, Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/1/2018 2:14:00 PM

lovely diamante, I've not written this form for ages, its very beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/1/2018 4:24:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Much fun.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/1/2018 2:14:00 PM

Indeed we are challengingly caught between powerful and overwhelming energies, emotions, stances and trance! Insightful piece of work! Stay bright dear Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/1/2018 4:25:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Besma. Most appreciated.