Caught In Between

fire wild, torrid crackling, consuming, liberating passion, heat, chill, frost freezing, seizing, imprisoning solid, compact ice
AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Fire and Ice. Wow! I wish I'd have thought of this; I AM the pyromaniac here afterall!
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 11:11 PM
LOL Keep the first and last lines and create your own poem, Caren.
Callus Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Excellent, Line. Full marks to you! Regards // paul
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 9:28 PM
Thank you so much, Paul. Most appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 6:10 PM
This kind of poem deserves a very good contrast, and that's what you delivered!
Gauthier Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 10:08 PM
Awesome. Most appreciated, Andrea.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 2:14 PM
Indeed we are challengingly caught between powerful and overwhelming energies, emotions, stances and trance! Insightful piece of work! Stay bright dear Line.
Gauthier Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Besma. Most appreciated.
Allison Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 2:14 PM
lovely diamante, I've not written this form for ages, its very beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Thank you, Jan. Much fun.
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