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Caught In a Daydream

quite coherent and aware
eyes wide open 
so continue to stare
here's where the tempo picks up
and the rhythm maintains 
caught in a daydream 
pause in a refrain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/20/2009 4:08:00 PM
Much in this concise poem for the reader to think about. I really like the closing two lines. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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