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Caught In a Cycle


morning
fresh  alive
bursting promising inviting
sunshine  birds  moonglow  stars
weighing menacing stifling
weary  spent
nightfall
 


AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019

hopelifemorningnaturenightdiamante

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Geoffrey Brewer

June 26, 2019 at 1:53 PM

Nice one, Line.

June 26, 2019 at 4:18 PM

Thanks, Geoffrey. Much appreciated.

June 26, 2019 at 12:48 PM

Congrats Line. Another well done poem.

June 26, 2019 at 4:18 PM

Thanks, Jeanne, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

June 25, 2019 at 9:26 PM

Nicely done Line, Congrats on your win..

June 25, 2019 at 9:51 PM

Thank you so much for hosting this fun contest, Joseph.

June 25, 2019 at 8:42 PM

Nicely done, Line:-) Congratulations on your win!

June 25, 2019 at 9:51 PM

Thanks, Edward. Much appreciated.

June 25, 2019 at 7:00 PM

Line congrats on your placement!;)

June 25, 2019 at 9:52 PM

Thanks, Brenda. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

June 9, 2019 at 3:06 AM

Beautiful, my Maestro Poet friend! I am sure it will go to the top.

June 9, 2019 at 9:17 AM

Thanks for your vote of confidence, Caren. Much appreciated.

June 8, 2019 at 4:09 PM

This is brilliant Line, surely a winner? With kindest thoughts Ann xx

June 8, 2019 at 4:29 PM

You are too kind. LOL as usual the competition is fierce, Ann.

Jennifer Proxenos

June 8, 2019 at 11:59 AM

a breathtaking Diamante - well penned Line! Hugs, Jennifer.

June 8, 2019 at 12:34 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and compliment, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

June 8, 2019 at 10:24 AM

EXCELLENT use of the form. Best I have seen here yet for this contest!

June 8, 2019 at 10:51 AM

Thanks, Andrea. It's still early. LOL

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