Maclawrence Famuyiwa Poet Haiku

Cats and dogs Hiku

in this dark night
      only silence w h i s p e r s~
cats couldn't  m   e   o   w  
t 
   h 
       e 
          n 
               the night s l e e p s
until the b a r k  of  a d o g ~
                                   the sun
               s up
           e  
        k 
    a
w





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Contest Judged: May 23rd, 2025 1:27:00 PM
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Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2025 at 7:51 AM Love the ending. I hate when dogs wake me up!! Maclawrence Famuyiwa May 23, 2025 at 9:25 AM This your response made me smile. I so much love love oit. Thanks.

Sara Kendrick May 21, 2025 at 2:49 AM Interesting layout. Thanks for sharing. Sara K Maclawrence Famuyiwa May 21, 2025 at 3:50 AM I really appreciate your honest and encouraging comments always.