Cathedral

reinforced concrete curves over stone ~ props up fresh air inside a dome
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Flaherty Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 12:38 PM
Fresh , Hot , Air
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 12:42 PM
How about thin air, your on the right track.
Neumann Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 4:53 AM
Nice one.
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 6:05 AM
Thank you for stopping by my poems today, cheers David
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 3:58 PM
I see a deeper meaning was involved. you are a clever one!!
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 4:07 PM
Thank you Andrea, Maybe that was always the idea, but I only realised when pondering over the first draft, cheers David
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 3:50 PM
Very well penned. With each spin, new air flows, but are they simply for cooling the air? Thought-provoking Monoku.
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 1:36 AM
Thank you for stopping by Lasaad I was merely contemplating the sheer weight of materials that went into building cathedral domes, thousands of tons in some cases, but was it just to give the impression of a weightless airy bubble to the observer? which in turn led me to another meaning, which I will leave up to the reader, cheers David
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