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Caterpillar

caterpillar dreams
of wings and sweet nectar -
while munching tough leaves

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Suzanne Delaney

March 5, 2016 at 11:56 AM

Beautiful contrasts. Always a great pleasure to read your works. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

June 14, 2013 at 12:31 AM

Nice image here. The contrast of him with his butterfly to be.

David De La Croes

June 14, 2013 at 1:04 AM

Thanks for your visit, Andrea. One can also relate the image to human endeavor... David

Suzanne Delaney

May 28, 2013 at 10:30 AM

This is splendid. I wrote a much longer piece- Butterfly- A Glosa from caterpillar to butterfly/ and you capture it all in 3 beautiful lines LOL Still I think it is one of the profound lessons of youth - knowing about metamorphosis, Thanks for stopping by my page today I was wondering how you are. Love SuZ

David De La Croes

May 29, 2013 at 12:36 AM

Thanks for your comment, and for missing me :) , SuZ. I've read your poem and found new appreciation and insight of life's development around us. Stay well. David.