Russell Sivey Poet Haiku

Category 7

the worst hurricane
a category seven
annihilating

destroying places
breaking apart homes, shelters
taking away life

lord please take pity
for the land is gone and life
heal us once again

this storm has done it
brought with death and destruction
the worst hurricane

Russell Sivey

Entrant into PD's "NATURE THE DESTROYER *HAIKU FORM ONLY*" contest

3/9/2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 23, 2012 at 1:17 PM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown March 19, 2012 at 5:18 AM Congratulations on your placement in this contest Russell. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 16, 2012 at 8:46 PM congrats Russel on a grand win for these emphatic words of Nature's angry destruction luv..

Kim Merryman March 16, 2012 at 5:40 PM A cat 7 hurricane would be unimaginable. I live in hurricane territory and have been through two big ones. Congrats on your win, Russell! Love, Kim

Gwendolen Song March 16, 2012 at 6:31 AM You penned the most catostrophic of hurricanes so nicely, Russell..a special congrats to you...I feel the terror of the storm so intensely! :) Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2012 at 10:33 PM RUSSELL~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Kash Poet March 9, 2012 at 10:40 PM Very good approach to the contest theme Russell.Best wishes for the contest.

Broken Butterfly March 9, 2012 at 7:14 PM wonderful set of haiku's for PD's contest, best of luck and Russell, thank you for my placement in your By Candlelight contest, you keep those inspiring contests coming and I will keep entering and thanks for all your encouraging and fantastic comments on my poems

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 9, 2012 at 6:45 PM a clever piece of poetry depicting destruction of the worst kind through lines of descriptive elegance Russell.. good luck luv.. and thankxx so very much for honoring my poem for first place in Candlelight contest.. much appereciated .. happy weekend..