Catch the Rays

How does the sun know How to slip through the shadows And bathe you in light?

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2013 8:32:00 AM

so awesome! I am going to try to notice. ARe you doing them all by 7/5/7 old traditional rule? You can be free with your syllable count! But you are doing amazing just following the old rule!

Rollo West
Date: 1/25/2013 10:49:00 PM

Yes, dear friend I am, I am a traditionalists at heart. Rollo

Reggae Magnet

Date: 1/13/2013 10:32:00 PM

This poem sort of come to life in its methamorphasis as you read it, nice write, enjoyed an experience relived.

Rollo West
Date: 1/14/2013 10:43:00 AM

Hi Robert, thank you so much for stopping by.

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/13/2013 6:20:00 PM

That is to show you that He reigns supreme. What He dictates day will be day. Love it, Rollo. So enjoyed!

Rollo West
Date: 1/13/2013 9:18:00 PM

Hi Toquyen, thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/13/2013 12:58:00 PM

It did that today Rollo , managed to have a coffee in it this morning with the frost all around xx

Rollo West
Date: 1/13/2013 9:17:00 PM

Hi Mandy, thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Kash Poet

Date: 1/13/2013 10:41:00 AM

Just excellent Rollo!Enjoyed.

Rollo West
Date: 1/13/2013 12:03:00 PM

Hi Kash, thank you so much my friend for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/13/2013 5:38:00 AM

Good question, wouldn't you love to ask it that? The sun is a wondrous and intriguing object as is your write my friend! I truly loved reading this remarkable and outstanding poem this morning! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 1/13/2013 12:04:00 PM

Hello Russell, thank you so much my friend for your great comment. Rollo