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Catch the Rays

How does the sun know
How to slip through the shadows
And bathe you in light?

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Andrea Dietrich

January 25, 2013 at 8:32 AM

so awesome! I am going to try to notice. ARe you doing them all by 7/5/7 old traditional rule? You can be free with your syllable count! But you are doing amazing just following the old rule!

Rollo West

January 25, 2013 at 10:49 PM

Yes, dear friend I am, I am a traditionalists at heart. Rollo

Reggae Magnet

January 13, 2013 at 10:32 PM

This poem sort of come to life in its methamorphasis as you read it, nice write, enjoyed an experience relived.

Rollo West

January 14, 2013 at 10:43 AM

Hi Robert, thank you so much for stopping by.

Toquyen Harrell

January 13, 2013 at 6:20 PM

That is to show you that He reigns supreme. What He dictates day will be day. Love it, Rollo. So enjoyed!

Rollo West

January 13, 2013 at 9:18 PM

Hi Toquyen, thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 13, 2013 at 12:58 PM

It did that today Rollo , managed to have a coffee in it this morning with the frost all around xx

Rollo West

January 13, 2013 at 9:17 PM

Hi Mandy, thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Kash Poet

January 13, 2013 at 10:41 AM

Just excellent Rollo!Enjoyed.

Rollo West

January 13, 2013 at 12:03 PM

Hi Kash, thank you so much my friend for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Russell Sivey

January 13, 2013 at 5:38 AM

Good question, wouldn't you love to ask it that? The sun is a wondrous and intriguing object as is your write my friend! I truly loved reading this remarkable and outstanding poem this morning! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!

Rollo West

January 13, 2013 at 12:04 PM

Hello Russell, thank you so much my friend for your great comment. Rollo

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