Catch the Moon

The tree caught the moon
In his branches. The passing
Of night makes her leave,

But each sundown brings
Her back round to his arms again;
She always returns.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 12:42 AM
Love it Annie - well done! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 4:17 PM
Neat enjambment, and what a silky smooth cadence! Now THIS is the way HAIKUs should be written... :) x
Grisetti Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 7:56 AM
A true lover, always returns. Very nice.
Williams Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:38 AM
Annie cool haiku's ..David
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