Catch Me Quickly

If you can only see
your love will set me free
give yourself to me 
or you can let me be 

My heart has the lock
your heart has the key
take insert and twist
an easy remedy

Make me not wait
I have chosen my mate
this is our fate
no time to be late

I long for your love
as I hope you long for mine
let us fly high above
until the end of time

by: Virginia Frayer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 1, 2011 at 5:04 PM
Okies this is rhyme but not enclosed rhyme lines 1 & 4 must rhyme enclosing lines 2&3, which must rhyme, then you'd have enclosed rhyme. Hope that helps. [verse 1 &3 are monorhyme, 2 & 4 are quatrain BUT label it simply rhyme and your OK] Light & Love
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February 6, 2011 at 7:13 PM
a sweet and loving write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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