Catch a Star

Today we'll try to say in rhymes
Some things unsaid in other times.
For, time has passed and now we see
A shining light where used to be
A shadowed, darkened silhouette
Of dreams unfilled and life unmet.
The shining light is what you are,
For, in your sights, you placed a star.
And springtime suns and winter chills
Saw lofty mountains change to hills.
The childhood dreams, through honest schemes,
All came together and, it seems,
Today, with pride, we see you stand --
The star you sought -- held in your hand.

Author's Note:
This one started it all.  My daughter, Joan had spent the previous 5 years obtaining 2 degrees at University of Texas. During our talking one night in our den she dared me to write a poem. I placed this on her as she lay sleeping on the couch. the same night. 
Jake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 1:02 AM
wow, now THAT is a story!!! Your daughter did an incredible thing for you. Wish my kids felt this way. I can't even get them to read my poems, and I recall being so proud of my kids when I saw them writing a few poems in high school. Lovely, John Posey.(is that really your last name? It goes so well for a poet AKA)
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September 14, 2014 at 3:05 AM
I'm glad you found it..... My daughter continued on to receive her PhD and is married to another PhD.... Mike is a great guy and they live only a couple of doors down from us here in Florida.... Yes, my real name is John Posey AKA Jacob Payne. I'll be visiting you soon.... Thanks for your comments.... Love ya.... Jake
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September 14, 2014 at 1:01 AM
first, you are lucky I happened to see that reply you made to me to come see this one. (I do not see replies unless by accident because I turned off the annoying notifications on them.) Second, I did not find this quickly and then realized I should look on this second page. OK now this better be good hahaha. Let me read it now.
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