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No tray Today! ‘Tiddles’ Piddles On floor By door Cat shat On mat! Squitty Kitty! Owner moaner Cleans mess.. Distress Cat ill Got chill Sees vet Named Bret Treats puss No fuss Huge bill For Pill Cat well All’s swell Your Choice Max 333 Words Poetry Contest- The sponsor says she has a short attention span so I made it as short as possible! Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger 9/8/19

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Date: 9/24/2019 12:03:00 PM
LOL, had a good chuckle at these
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Date: 9/12/2019 5:33:00 PM
back with big CONCATS!! heehee
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Date: 9/11/2019 8:41:00 AM
Ha ha, another fun one from your pen. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/11/2019 8:25:00 AM
Thanks for putting a smile on my face - congratulations on your win Jan!
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Date: 9/11/2019 8:02:00 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Jan.
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Date: 9/11/2019 3:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jan!;)
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Date: 9/11/2019 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win... many blessings.
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Date: 9/10/2019 7:41:00 PM
I think Caren's going to like this a lot --- too! :) gw
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Date: 9/9/2019 5:44:00 PM
this is very clever, Jan. Love it. By the way, for me, puss does not rhyme with Fuss, but PUS does. So if puss rhymes with fuss for someone in England, what does pus rhyme with??
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/11/2019 3:15:00 PM
so pussy sounds like fussy with a P? so funny to me!!! (I am thinking of something naughty and it also sounds gross now!)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2019 6:05:00 PM
Both pus and puss rhyme with fuss lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 4:35:00 PM
I can tell that this is one of your fav forms, Jan...you excel in it! Hugs // paul
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2019 4:52:00 PM
I just love the form and the humour than can come in so few words:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 12:24:00 PM
Jan....you are the BEST! I delighted in this read. Footles are difficult for me to come up with. I laughed all the way from beginning to end of this clever Footle! Bravo! : ) xxoo
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2019 4:46:00 PM
I find them such fun and so simple to write Connie I thought I would go for a little poem as Caren says she has a short attention span. hope she likes this one:-)hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 7:36:00 AM
Cat shat on mat?! Really? That is so funny. I love it. (The Pic too!) ...80)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2019 4:41:00 PM
I couldn't resist that line Pat I hope Caren finds the poem funny:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/8/2019 8:24:00 PM
The voice of experience! Bonne chance! Aloha! Rico
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2019 4:38:00 PM
thankfully not my experience lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/8/2019 4:20:00 PM
Hi Jan, You excell in this form as well. I enjoyed the read. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2019 4:38:00 PM
thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/8/2019 3:44:00 PM
Very fun and creative Jan, enjoyed! :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2019 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/8/2019 1:31:00 PM
Awesome, Jan. Well penned.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2019 3:58:00 PM
thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/8/2019 12:03:00 PM
- "Tiddles Piddles " ... fun, Jan :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2019 12:10:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise - based on recent experiencing of a friend and her cat:-( hugs Jan xx

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