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Catastrophe

No tray
Today!

‘Tiddles’
Piddles

On floor
By door

Cat shat
On mat!

Squitty
Kitty!

Owner
moaner

Cleans mess..
Distress

Cat ill
Got chill

Sees vet
Named Bret

Treats puss
No fuss

Huge bill
For Pill

Cat well
All’s swell

Your Choice Max 333 Words Poetry Contest- The sponsor says she has a short attention span so I made it as short as possible!

Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

9/8/19

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Jack Horne September 24, 2019 at 12:03 PM LOL, had a good chuckle at these

Andrea Dietrich September 12, 2019 at 5:33 PM back with big CONCATS!! heehee

Richard Lamoureux September 11, 2019 at 8:41 AM Ha ha, another fun one from your pen. Congrats on your win.

Paul Marc September 11, 2019 at 8:25 AM Thanks for putting a smile on my face - congratulations on your win Jan!

Line Gauthier September 11, 2019 at 8:02 AM Back with well deserved congrats, Jan.

Brenda Chiri September 11, 2019 at 3:48 AM Congrats on your win Jan!;)

Regina Mcintosh September 11, 2019 at 12:20 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win... many blessings.

Gershon Wolf September 10, 2019 at 7:41 PM I think Caren's going to like this a lot --- too! :) gw

Andrea Dietrich September 9, 2019 at 5:44 PM this is very clever, Jan. Love it. By the way, for me, puss does not rhyme with Fuss, but PUS does. So if puss rhymes with fuss for someone in England, what does pus rhyme with?? Andrea Dietrich September 11, 2019 at 3:15 PM so pussy sounds like fussy with a P? so funny to me!!! (I am thinking of something naughty and it also sounds gross now!) Jan Allison September 9, 2019 at 6:05 PM Both pus and puss rhyme with fuss lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus September 9, 2019 at 4:35 PM I can tell that this is one of your fav forms, Jan...you excel in it! Hugs // paul Jan Allison September 9, 2019 at 4:52 PM I just love the form and the humour than can come in so few words:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong September 9, 2019 at 12:24 PM Jan....you are the BEST! I delighted in this read. Footles are difficult for me to come up with. I laughed all the way from beginning to end of this clever Footle! Bravo! : ) xxoo Jan Allison September 9, 2019 at 4:46 PM I find them such fun and so simple to write Connie I thought I would go for a little poem as Caren says she has a short attention span. hope she likes this one:-)hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams September 9, 2019 at 7:36 AM Cat shat on mat?! Really? That is so funny. I love it. (The Pic too!) ...80) Jan Allison September 9, 2019 at 4:41 PM I couldn't resist that line Pat I hope Caren finds the poem funny:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta September 8, 2019 at 8:24 PM The voice of experience! Bonne chance! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison September 9, 2019 at 4:38 PM thankfully not my experience lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. September 8, 2019 at 4:20 PM Hi Jan, You excell in this form as well. I enjoyed the read. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Jan Allison September 9, 2019 at 4:38 PM thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin September 8, 2019 at 3:44 PM Very fun and creative Jan, enjoyed! :) Jan Allison September 8, 2019 at 3:58 PM Thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier September 8, 2019 at 1:31 PM Awesome, Jan. Well penned. Jan Allison September 8, 2019 at 3:58 PM thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2019 at 12:03 PM - "Tiddles Piddles " ... fun, Jan :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison September 8, 2019 at 12:10 PM Thanks Anne-Lise - based on recent experiencing of a friend and her cat:-( hugs Jan xx