Cat and Mouse Chase

Cat’s
Chasing
Puny mouse,
Catching it by
Tail
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Woolum Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 7:08 AM
There's many ways one person could translate this. I take it as a struggle. Like trying to get away, but not able to. Maybe I'm wrong? Cute piece anyway though. (: I enjoyed it.
Breidenthal Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 9:36 PM
I like your way of looking at my poem! I appreciate your criticism
Kendrick Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 2:18 PM
Cute one..Enjoyed.Sara
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