Cat

She sits in the sunshine On the drive Coat gleaming Resting on Pirelli paws Purring through Chromium jaws

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2009 2:21:00 AM

Love those cats. Like they are light as a feather and agile as a cloud. Keep writing. Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/25/2009 2:25:00 AM

I love this one, John. I love your description of the gleaming coat and resting... Chromium jaws is a perfect line! Pirelli paws! (A boy named Ralph Pirelli lived in my childhood neighborhood. In fact, he gave me my first kiss...forgot about that... He was cute 13ish and I was 10. Hum! Now that was a hide and seek game...)

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 10/22/2009 5:30:00 AM

This reminds me of my little kitten. Nice poem John. Love Pam.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/21/2009 3:51:00 AM

What a cat she is unique John. She should be kept in the house. Love, Carol