Castle of Flowers a Collaboration With Ian Jones

Another day of crazy heat
Sweat flowing, lethargy creeping
Shimmering images rise up from the street
I grab my towel, no time for sleeping

Singing giggles
Of colourful tickles
Endearing children castles

What is that joyous sound from the pool?
I eagerly peer from behind a tree trunk tall
A writhing castle of children playing, I feel such a fool
As I hide and I smile and I watch them all

The dancing littles
The heart sizzles
With love whistles

Pure joy rises as turrets of arms and legs
With trumpet calls of shrieks and laughs
The castellations of bobbing heads
And a draw bridge lowers as one falls off

The mind drizzles
The mite bubbles
Free young stars, pure bundles

The bright Spring flowers of our tomorrow
Splashing and laughing with no pretences
The love generated by them, no room for sorrow
This Castle of Flowers with fun time defences

Such innocent windows
Of future heroes
Kingdoms blooming for tomorrows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 7:41 AM
what delightful fun imagery - oh those wonderful days of childhood when life was so simple. Great collaboration good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Hunjeri Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 1:04 PM
thank you so much Jan. I appreciate the visit
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