Castle of Flowers a Collaboration With Ian Jones

Another day of crazy heat
Sweat flowing, lethargy creeping
Shimmering images rise up from the street
I grab my towel, no time for sleeping

Singing giggles
Of colourful tickles
Endearing children castles

What is that joyous sound from the pool?
I eagerly peer from behind a tree trunk tall
A writhing castle of children playing, I feel such a fool
As I hide and I smile and I watch them all

The dancing littles
The heart sizzles
With love whistles

Pure joy rises as turrets of arms and legs
With trumpet calls of shrieks and laughs
The castellations of bobbing heads
And a draw bridge lowers as one falls off

The mind drizzles
The mite bubbles
Free young stars, pure bundles

The bright Spring flowers of our tomorrow
Splashing and laughing with no pretences
The love generated by them, no room for sorrow
This Castle of Flowers with fun time defences

Such innocent windows
Of future heroes
Kingdoms blooming for tomorrows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/16/2015 7:41:00 AM
what delightful fun imagery - oh those wonderful days of childhood when life was so simple. Great collaboration good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Hunjeri Avatar
Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 1:04:00 PM
thank you so much Jan. I appreciate the visit
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter