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Castle Ghosts

Childrens' carefree laughter abruptly endinG; Adults too have goosebumps on their flesH. Some are joking - but it's only bravadO. They claim to hope to see the resident ghostS. Looking around the castle ruins, children start to play, buT Everybody jumps when a shadowy figure appearS...

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Date: 7/7/2024 11:34:00 PM
This double acrostic is really good, Jack! Many declare that they are not afraid of ghosts, but deep down they are though they do their best not to show it :) Congratulations on your top win, my friend. // paul
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Date: 7/6/2024 7:29:00 AM
A scary adventure, Very nicely penned Jack, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/27/2024 8:58:00 AM
Maybe they should phone Ghost Busters. Jokes aside when i watch a documentary of people who actually do this as a business ad go into suspected haunted houses to chase ghosts, I get the shivers. Hope you are well Jack, Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 6/26/2024 7:42:00 AM
Good one. I can't imagine feeling the presence of something otherworldly. Sara K
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Date: 6/26/2024 6:07:00 AM
Spooky, cool double acrostic. Run!
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