Judith Deverell Poet I do not know?

Cast the Bridges

Cast the bridges that ply the bright seas
Sweeping proud ashes beneath its streams
They go past unnoticed with hazy bent wings
And cease not to lose their footing for the light they bring

Scalloped the fringes of silvered seas
Surging lace filigrees that unloose tight seams
Passing the marbled halls their veiled voice stays
And seals up all hallow canyons left by their waves

Loosed the moonbeams on all bare shores
Bringing new aligns to our poor peppered bites
By lingering light the heated wealth lies taken
And all peoples’ hoarded gain by revelation lies forsaken

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 6, 2011 at 3:50 AM Well Written Judith ....A pleasure to read..!!!!!Love the last line!!!! Judith Deverell August 6, 2011 at 3:57 AM Thank you :) Chiquita!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 5, 2011 at 7:52 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Judith. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol Judith Deverell August 6, 2011 at 3:59 AM Hi Carol! This is my first day on Poetry Soup and I am amazed how kind and generous and so soon the comments! Bless you!

Elizabeth Wesley August 5, 2011 at 12:23 AM So soft and lovely, to delight the mind! Judith Deverell August 6, 2011 at 4:00 AM Oh, thank you!

Doris Culverhouse August 5, 2011 at 12:07 AM I agree with your fans....poeticly wonderful!! Judith Deverell August 6, 2011 at 4:02 AM Wow! My first day at this and to have fans already! Amazing! Thank you, Doris! All the best with your own delightful poetry!

Robert A. Dufresne August 4, 2011 at 9:38 PM pure poetry Judith. Very well done. Judith Deverell August 6, 2011 at 4:09 AM Oh, you can't know how encouraging your comment, Robert! About six months ago I sent my work to professionals in a Poetry Society, and they did not like them! They wrote me screeds on how I ought to write poetry; I just cried and gave up poetry writing!!! I am writing a novel at the moment! So.....bless you for your kind comment!!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 4, 2011 at 9:32 PM Meaningful and thoughtful expressions, Judith Judith Deverell August 6, 2011 at 4:12 AM Thank you so much!!! That you see the meaning is awesome to me, because I thought no one ever would!! ...I am stunned!!