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Cast a Long Shadow

lingering thoughts cast a long shadow beneath the lambency of full moon we twirl together, my mind attuned within the expanse of dreams aglow i hear your whisper fall in night's air feel your restless hands yearning for trust pulling me into your rhythmic thrust foretaste the climax of dreams we share yet do i dare love you outside of thought taste the honey of your lips pressed tight or lay you down on these sheets of white inking you in memories as dreams sought? September 28, 2019 Pick A Title, Vol 9 - Enclosed Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/4/2019 7:21:00 AM

Congrats my friend on your podium win with this superb write.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/4/2019 9:28:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend...being i struggle with rhyme, when i win with a rhyming poem, it helps build my confidence a little :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 9/30/2019 7:52:00 AM

Poetic dream written in ink that flows of love and desire. Deeply touching my friend. A beautifully sensual write that floats softly into the mind of the reader. Best of luck in the contest

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/30/2019 8:28:00 AM

Thank you my friend...i started this one thursday...kept saving it and adding to it...you know me and rhyme... :) hugs

Silent One

Date: 9/29/2019 12:27:00 PM

Damn...Ahem... Sensual romantic poem... Nice rhymes..

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2019 12:32:00 PM

lol, thanks my friend...i struggled with this one for several days.. rhyme is tough for me... hugs :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/29/2019 11:52:00 AM

Well written Enclosed Rhyme Sandra :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2019 11:59:00 AM

Thank you Heidi...i struggle with rhyme and meter always...glad this one turned out :) hugs

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/29/2019 11:15:00 AM

Only the shadow knows...and your shadow sings great poetry my friend...watch out for the light lol...^WW^ {*_J*)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2019 11:58:00 AM

lol...we have to step out of the darkness and into the light sometimes my friend.... thanks :) hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/28/2019 11:58:00 PM

Beautiful entry that should do wonderfully. You always are so creative I admire you. Bless you

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2019 11:58:00 AM

Thank you so much Regina, what a sweet thing to say... hugs :) God bless

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/28/2019 8:31:00 PM

A romantic gorgeous enclosed rhyme that should be highly placed in Edward's contest my friend. xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2019 11:57:00 AM

Thank you so much for you vote my sweet friend...i struggle with rhyme ...hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/28/2019 4:01:00 PM

Truly lovely Sandra, a beautiful ecstatic write, sensual and worthy of a win - holding thumbs! Hugs, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2019 11:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Jennifer, i always struggle with rhymes, glad you thought it turned out well :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/28/2019 2:53:00 PM

- Everything that gives pleasure ... also has seeds for longing ... and desires, dear Sandra :) - Beautiful poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2019 11:53:00 AM

Thank you my friend :) hugs

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/28/2019 1:23:00 PM

I like how you loved here...

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/28/2019 1:34:00 PM

Thank you Arturo...sometimes it safer to love in dreams... hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/28/2019 1:20:00 PM

Lingering thoughts..climax of dreams..you painted an environment ripe for romance..well written poem, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/28/2019 1:34:00 PM

thank you my friend... this one took me days to complete... hugs :)