Cashew and the Boy

cashew, sweet cashew
Staining by shoe
Making mother blue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Creatively cute Charles and a wonderful title too ... enjoyed this entertaining write with luv..my friend..
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 10:02 PM
Cute little rhymes, Charles. I just love cashews!
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February 7, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Oh, such a cute image, Charles. You have a gem here. Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 10:45 AM
This made me smile! I do believe we would call this a senryu! Because it's about human beings and is a bit wry and humorous. Both haiku & senryu do not use capital letters or punctuation, also they do not have titles [the first line may be put in the space provided for a title on the soup poem entry form] EXCELLENT senryu...if you could spare a limerick for my animal limerick contests for children it would be a big help! I only need 2 more! phew! Light & Love
Babcock Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 6:53 AM
I am not familiar with this expression but I do like cashews (that is the edible type). the second line should be 7 syllables. love mom
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February 4, 2011 at 10:44 AM
a smart, enjoyable read, charles! fascinating with best wishes in the contest..:) huggs, nette
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