Cascading Light

Ribbons of color
Prancing through the light
Bathe new buds to life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Spence Sr Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 10:11 PM
Congratulations, and excellent haiku, Kimberly. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. I am very proud of you and your poetic proliferation. The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme of "Cascading Light" stands out, and the tone moves the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, and God's richest grace and blessings to you always. –Professor, Ambassador, Dr. Joseph S. Spence Sr. (Epulaeryu Master)!
Fenn Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Gorgeous, delightful haiku!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 6:20 AM
Oh, Kim, how much I love this haiku! Haiku is my favourite form, and your haiku paints a most beautiful picture. Love ~ Mala
Sikorski Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 11:40 AM
You have made my heart sing my friend ! My deepest thanks ! Kim
Romios Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Great one, Kim Ribbon lover, Panagiota
Sikorski Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Giggling here ! I can never resist the temptation of sliding down the isle of my local craft store ! The ribbon isle should be off limits to me ! I’m addicted...this includes the rows of thread as well ! Thanks ! Kim
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February 19, 2021 at 4:51 AM
Love it. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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February 20, 2021 at 2:12 PM
Thank you Gina. Believe it or not it took me all afternoon to finish the last line. I’ve been praying for everyone. Especially those who have lost family members. My cousins wife lost both her parents and then they both became ill. These are very trying times indeed ! Kim
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