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Cascades

The softended ocean waves touch sand
Retreats comes again and again.
A never-ending process until~
Until it meets a rocky terrain

Our daily lives can become like waves.
Over and over sameness parades
Until one day a shift in axis
Everything we've known cascades~

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Kind of a mixture of several types of poems..Echo..Rhyme..Even Shape
Written in the last few days ...

For Brian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hargreaves Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 10:54 AM
Hi Sara Like this and its creative style. Cascades. I love to watch the tides - the ocean coming and going. Tony.
Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 11:37 AM
Thank you, Tony. The ocean is interesting for sure, but a mighty force with much power and danger. Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to comment. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 10:56 AM
A creative write/picture. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Kendrick Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Thank you, Paula. We need all the blessings we can get. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 1:59 AM
Your imagery is great. I can see the waves hitting the rocks.
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 4:07 AM
Why, thank you, Victor. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Pandit Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Highly expressive poem, Sara. I like the art that speaks.
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 1:46 PM
I am glad that you like it and the art. Sara
Poet Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 8:55 AM
Great thought expressed here, Sara. Well done. Blessings
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 1:42 PM
I need all the blessings I can get. Thanks, Sara.
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 8:50 AM
- Lovely writing, Sara :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 1:41 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise..I appreciate your faithfulness in dropping by. Sara
Sands Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 7:39 AM
We written Sara :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 8:40 AM
Thank you, Heidi. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to read and comment. Sara
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