Carved In Stone

sinews reverberate with power of the strike,
as the chisel cuts into the rock on hillside,  
his face glistens in sweaty heat of summer light,
lost in the passion of his work no shade to hide!

with every hit the sound echoes around the site,
the rock crumbles to his wishes as he desires,
he works all day and rarely stops at cold of night,
some pass by in wonder while some stop to admire!

his heart will not rest till this hardened rock is carved,
until he creates in stone what he lost in flesh,
his mind is set, fabric of his being love starved,
no one has seen him eat, sleep or pause to refresh!

seasons go by as the figure slowly takes shape,
an exquisite beauty stands where once was cold stone,
serene face most delicate in finery draped,
an embodiment of love that his heart bemoans!

what can restore a love that is lost for ever?
his catharsis from her depthless pool of romance,
stands she alone, the result of his endeavour,
see how a flame of passion does a stone enhance!


2nd placement
Catharsis poetry contest
Written 4/12/2020
Silent One sponsored

12 syllables each abab cdcd rhyme sequence
5 quatrains 20 lines

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Date: 12/12/2020 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations Krish on your win!!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/12/2020 7:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Mark!!:)
Date: 12/11/2020 3:03:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/12/2020 7:12:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise! See you have changed your profile photo to a more festive one!!
Date: 12/10/2020 2:25:00 PM
This is really original, Krish. An artist brings to life his lost love with a sculpture --relief emanates from his heart. BIG congrats on your podium win.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/10/2020 2:56:00 PM
Thanks Vijay! much appreciate your visit and words of support!
Date: 12/10/2020 9:03:00 AM
A really deep metaphorical take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/10/2020 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Silent! Honoured to win a placement. some great poems have resulted from this challenge!
Date: 12/3/2020 5:57:00 PM
Wow! This is powerful, Krish! What a catharsis this is for the love-starved sculptor. 'serene face most delicate in finery draped' is just an exquisite line of verse as well. Kudos, Gershon
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/3/2020 10:42:00 PM
Gershon, my friend, thank you very much! you always bring cheer!!
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