Cars In the Trough

deep circular scars…
cold dark troughs between sandbars
sharks larger than cars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Tacito Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Damn Robb! Nice one! Nothing like a shark bite to leave an impact...
Onclaud Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 10:47 AM
smashing! enjoyed evry word that led to a stunning last line, robb! :) huggs, nette
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