Cars Go Racing By

Birds are flying high
Slimey slugs are moving real slow
Cars go racing by
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 4:45 PM
Nice Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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July 16, 2009 at 3:47 PM
Interesting perspective of contrast to give the reader something to think about. Much said in just three lines. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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July 15, 2009 at 8:04 PM
Well, that line was unexcepted jojojo @.@ from nature all the way to motorization, yei!!!=D=D I like they way everything is suddenly opposed jojo thanks for the experience=D
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