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Cars Go Racing By

Birds are flying high Slimey slugs are moving real slow Cars go racing by

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2009 4:45:00 PM

Nice Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

Date: 7/16/2009 3:47:00 PM

Interesting perspective of contrast to give the reader something to think about. Much said in just three lines. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Cesar Cantu

Date: 7/15/2009 8:04:00 PM

Well, that line was unexcepted jojojo @.@ from nature all the way to motorization, yei!!!=D=D I like they way everything is suddenly opposed jojo thanks for the experience=D