Carrion Carry On

       vultures swirl… jackals

        howl… carrion flesh foul...

          buzzards on the prowl
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Maverick Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 10:55 AM
They were just biden their time j'd reckon.)
Tor Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 8:12 PM
When you see them circling something is dead below them...
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 5:51 PM
i can see the circling… a scary circle!
M  Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:14 AM
Fun poem….Nice rhyming BB….and terrible punctuation by me! Debx
Lawless Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 10:07 AM
and sea gulls steal hot dogs at the beach
M  Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:13 AM
Thats funny John!!
Singh Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 9:23 PM
Vultures swirl,jackals howl but the living don't want to die.....short interesting poem.
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