' Carpenter's Rule ... ' 54th Senryu

‘ Carpenter’s Rule … ’      54th  Senryu


   ‘ HE ’  … Is Not A Fool
Can Not Use GOD, Like A Tool ...
     Carpenter’s Gold-Rule
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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 27, 2009 at 1:26 PM
You are on a roll, MoonBee. On a senryu journey across the Soup. How delightful your writings are. Love to you. Dane Ann (Soupmail)
Freeman Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 8:40 PM
Only one rule so golden, but seems so hard for humanity to learn, how to measure with. No matter, it will still be there after all is said and done. Some will have to learn later. Sincere, Love, Moses
Goff Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 8:22 PM
very cool! soup-mail!
Haick Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 5:34 PM
We tend to take Him for granted very often! Thought-provoking! Peace and love, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 4:25 PM
Interesting thoughts on the about "He" and the carpenter's golden-rule. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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