an OPEN VERSE as below uses spaces&breaks/no grammatical symbols /relies on 'the one breath limitation'/this intuitive cadence permits the 'reader' (reciter)to respond in an interpretative-interplay unique to the ' happening moment'
Yesterday has flown buried in the past Tomorrow another day twenty-four hours away for in Today always we stay a place in which we live &breathe love &live moment by moment yet so little done the pathos of things a nearly man on a lonely path where tempo treads softly feelings sitting on a volcano one thing leads to another A watershed to catch this miracle & seize the day to unveil a painting to complete a lyric to write music so sweet its late create & seize the day
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