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show me where your heart is hiding.
in the darkened place it sleeps
always searching ever finding
its your heart for which i continue to seek.
this carousel in the desert scream
happiness in the worse inablities
round and round it sways and swings
and things are never what they seem.
and what diamond in the ruff shall i find next.
another like you 
a broken nervous wreck
i cried for you i still do 
your everything that i dream
and here i am on the carousel 
lost in the desert scream.
but if i keep on riding
what is it i find
an indgule in the dead of spring
the green despair from which i shines
how can ice so sensitive last
where the tempurtures rise.
the same way a person can live
with there life full of lies.
no chill fills the air
only mist and fog
even with these great extremes
along the way i trot.
im almost there i see it sand dunes in the bloody ice
in the cave beneath those grains
thats where it sleeps at night 
the sand is a blanket 
but it doesn't make your heart warm
i want us to make it
but can we survive this storm?
I've traveled all this way
i wont give up hope, faith or trust 
i can make it beneath these illisuions
i have to i must 
just show me where you heart is hiding
my feet cannot make the journey home
and maybe if you carry me
neither of us would be alone.
you showed me your heart once.
and then you hid it away
always searching ever finding
in a place that would never fade.
show me where your heart is hiding
in the darkened place it sleeps
always searching ever finding
its you heart for which i continue to seek.

by:Krystyna Luke
1/1/08

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/22/2009 3:04:00 PM
This is a gorgeous poem Krystyna, are you new to Poetry soup too, I only joined last night and still finding my way around, but everyone is so nice and really inspiring.. Thankyou for your comments on my poems, its the first time I have ever shown them on any website.. Can't wait to see more of your work... Jo
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