" Carolyn "

1  " This is so Moving "
      " News reports," ( Feature ) " Children "
       ( Love ) " to these Orphans "   ( Carolyn Devonshire )

   2  You have moved my Heart
       You Brave Children of Haiti
       Your Spirit Lives On      ( HG )

   Dedicated to ( History Poetess ) " Carolyn Devonshire "

   Author's Note : The First Senryu is Carolyn's Words
   In a Comment to my POEM : " MIATIANNA "

       The Second Senryu is my Response
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 3:19 PM
My heart goes out to the people of Haiti, nice poem for them. I gave to the Red Cross to help out as best I could. Ellen
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January 31, 2010 at 11:00 AM
A very fiting dedication to a sweetheart of ps. HG, sincerly, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 5:24 PM
hahaha, you are capturing so well our essence. I also think of Carolyn as the history poetess!
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January 30, 2010 at 3:04 AM
Carolyn,wherever i go i shall always remeber Carolyn as a friend who puts a smile on my face,a sensitive caring lady, a forever friend and a talented poet who makes History interesting much more then my english teacher used to,lovely tribute to a lovely Woman,,Charma
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January 29, 2010 at 9:54 PM
Thank you for sharing your beautiful Miatianna with us, HG. You've touched me deeply with both that poem and this one. God bless you, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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January 29, 2010 at 8:57 PM
The inspiration you use is boundless, great work HG...Raul
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