Carolyn

Though waves of tears 
                                have washed you now, 
                                 unto another shore,
                          a precious echo of your heart,
                          to Whom your poem implored
                     'Lord, let me embrace him once more,
                           Before You carry him home',
                              Penned as rushing tears 
                                 crashed  flooding,
                                  life's sorrowed
                                    silt and loam    
                           
                              Carolyn, your poems
                           now read, penned through 
                                your loving hand 
                                Times of sunshine
                                  Or Days of rain
                                       fell way'  
                               like grains of sand
                            
                           Rest in Peace sweet poet 
                             now forevermore.
                     Though poets pen has tearfully, 
                        with sorrow, been laid down
                    The words you wove together 
                       are a golden poet's crown,
                        
                         Now as we ponder poetry 
                          that you have left behind,
                            Tears fall, our hearts
                                  are mourning
                            as we are so inclined,
                             Yet you're released 
                              to  heaven's mercy
                          Of Creator's love sublime
                        
                          You entrusted in a prayer 
                      A loving Lord you could not see,
                     Behind you lay life's sorrows now
                                that veil of misery
                             
                       Onward walk dear Caroline 
                     in heaven's  wonderous peace
                         Upon the blessed waters    
                            Beside a crystal sea
                            And the joy you find 
                                Forever there
                          will never ebb or cease
                          
                                
                             Written for Carolyn,
                                Rest in Peace
                                   dear poet

                                      ~ B.J ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Turner Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 5:50 AM
This is such a lovely tribute, BJ. She was a sweetheart . She encouraged me more than once. A worthy poem which she would have loved.
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 12:32 PM
She was such a sweetheart, my heart aches again to know she's gone. Thank you Daniel, your comments and visits have been such a blessing to me.
Ball Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Beautiful and deeply moving BJ. A fine farewell to a much loved friend to us all. Bravo. God Bless, JB
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 9:47 PM
Thank you Judy! I'm sorry I haven't had much of a chance to be on here and read up on my dear friends comments. You are so sweet, thank you for your kind words. God bless my friend, hope you are doing well <3 ~BJ
Horsman Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 8:28 PM
Hi, BJ Carolyn would have loved this wonderful poem, i know i do.
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 12:51 AM
Thank you so much Harry, your encouraging words mean a lot to me. She was a blessing of a poet, I hope all the tributes to her are shared with her in heaven!
One Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 7:26 AM
This is so touching and beautiful...I miss Carolyn a lot..
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 12:54 PM
Thank you SO, she was very gifted. Thank you also for stopping by and leaving a comment. I hope you are doing well. I have prayed for you for the months you were absent from Poetry Soup, I am so glad to see you back. I missed you. Seeing you back is such a blessed answer to my prayers. I am not able to be on here nearly as much as I wish, and interact with those poets on here that I so much appreciate. I appreciate your comment and your presence back on the soup very much. Hope you are doing well and having a good week.
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 3:24 PM
how beautiful your tribute is, BJ. You ought to find a poem of hers, copy and paste it and then submit it to my current contest, telling why you like it! Anyway, thanks for your sweet comments on my poems last night too!
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 12:29 AM
That is hard to choose, I am amazed by so many of them. I use to deem myself a poet, now sometimes I wonder as I read those of the likes of hers, and so many on the soup, I am blessed, and humbled. I do wish I did comment more, then as now. The one I tried to focus on was the prayer for her brother, but also tied in her obvious love of the ocean. She caught big fish with her fishing lines, and she caught hearts with her poetry lines. Thank you so much Andrea for your sweet comments to me <3 I am blessed
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 11:19 AM
A tribute of water’s ebb and flow, rain, and crystal sea! Lovely! RIP Carolyn!
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 1:42 AM
Thank you Kim <3
Mcintosh Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 1:54 PM
This is beautiful, a light to pierce the blackest darkness, a sigh of hope and a reflection of affection. You've written such a joyful inspiration that it soothes away the grief, sweet friend. God bless you always and you are loved, in prayer, Gina
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 1:43 AM
Thank you sweet Gina <3
Laurie Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Hello BJ ... you have written a beautiful tribute foe someone you obviously loved and enjoyed reading Carolyn's poetry. It's very sad indeed BJ - Lindsay
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 1:51 AM
Thank you Lindsay, a truly sad loss to poetry soup. I would be very sad at the loss of any of our fellow poets. I think as poets, we are more empathetic to life and death, and so many things. Her poems live on, here on the soup as well as other places, and that is such a precious gift. A sweet legacy.
Pandit Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 3:18 PM
An heartfelt tribute and a prayer to a special person. So well written, BJ. RIP Carolyn.
Legros Kelley Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 5:21 PM
Thank you Vijay
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