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Carnivorous Beasts

Does it make you weak to watch me bleed or are you an apathetic beast? Is my love another meal to you? Will it churn and run right through? Did your heartbeat's pounding scare you when in my carnivorous view? Were you afraid of its strength unleashed? Would I devour your fleshy feast? Did you attack the lively prey first for your yearning stomach's thirst, or did you break my flesh apart in self-defense of your own heart?

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Date: 12/26/2013 5:34:00 PM
Congrats on your great winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 12/20/2013 4:32:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, Juliet
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Date: 12/19/2013 7:08:00 PM
Very stirring.....congratulations
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Date: 12/19/2013 12:06:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem Juliet in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/18/2013 8:39:00 PM
Powerful. Very powerful. Wonderful write <3
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Date: 10/12/2013 10:38:00 AM
like a tyrant........... Juliet, wow... wow... I think perhaps the carnivore is putting up a defense code, and feeding of your heart.... a mighty deep poem...........SKAT
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