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7/29/2025 for Carnival Nights Poetry Contest sponsored by Robert James Liguori
Carnival Date
It was nineteen-eighty and I felt great -
off to the carnival with Brenda on a date.
Am I really going out with this beauty?
Showing her a good time - that was my duty.
Under the stars, on the intramural field,
her excitement for the rides was unconcealed.
The stars and lights flashed in her pretty eyes -
it was like fireworks exploding in the skies,
but I was looking at a lot more than that -
and was hoping for more than rides and a chat.
For her fun was a ride on a Ferris wheel,
but I was all wrapped up in her sex appeal.
We were together, but on a different page,
The rides scared me - upside down in a cage!
My goodness, that was forty-five years ago.
I wish I could have shared her experience, though.
And that was my first and last date with Brenda,
a boy and a girl with a different agenda.
Copyright © David Crandall | Year Posted 2025
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