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Carnival Autumn's Ghostly Hubble

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It is Carnival Autumn's Ghostly Hubble Halloween Night, as emotions bubble; kids full of mischief getting into trouble. The whole carnival is decked out with Halloween décor! Lit jack-o-lanterns, ghosts, skulls covered in gore, spiders on webs, whole new world waiting to explore. How many would think this would be fine, but what happens next will soon change their mind. The clown's face painted and cracked in white paint, a scar over it's brow, fiery orange hair, thin mouth a garish red taint. It snarls a show of thorn bloody teeth; each evil glaring eye lined a black cross and beneath a red ball for a nose. It wears a ruffled collar satin clown suit, half red the other half white and big black combat boots. It sneaks in the shadows following kids scent in the air to descend and snare to bring too it's lair. Kids candy full bellies sweetens the flavor, it cannot wait to sink its teeth to savor the sweetness; it will not be wavered. 10/28/2018

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Date: 10/28/2018 11:27:00 AM
Ut oh, love it Eve
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Date: 10/28/2018 9:10:00 AM
Excellent and nice Halloween verses. Enjoyed reading it. Scary too.
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Date: 10/28/2018 7:17:00 AM
Oh, boy, you have certainly brought us to the fear level in the clown department. My children at school have been warned about killer clowns, and none want to go to the circus. I know this nicely rhymed poem will have them running in the opposite direction now, Eve.
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Date: 10/28/2018 6:04:00 AM
I love Halloween, and this poem!!!
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Date: 10/28/2018 4:52:00 AM
scary, scary - goosebumps dreary ! Halloweens win funny teen! /// nice rhyming // lovely poem
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Date: 10/28/2018 4:48:00 AM
I'm not a Halloween fan Eve and the costumes can be so scary. Love your vivid descriptive poem, fabulous rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/28/2018 2:41:00 AM
Lovely Halloween verse Eve, them clowns put the fear of god into people lol. Tom
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