Carnival

Crowded joyful streets
People disguised show their dreams
Carnival governs the day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Oh, I like this one, Gert. I wish I could go to Carnival! And thanks for your kind comment on my REflections poem. Luv, andrea
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February 16, 2010 at 2:21 PM
Its Carnival Here in Malta too Gert..Lovely Haiku indeed..love the last verse...Recomment..You lived in Edinburgh--Its a wonderful place indeed,I visited Scotland many times,Yep i'm in love with it indeed..Cant stop going there..Regarding your Country its an awesome place too..tnks for stopping by:)Charma
Culverhouse Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 11:21 AM
sounds so fun, reminds me of the wistful days of youth!! And thanks for your comments.
Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 11:21 AM
Sounds like a fun day. Thanks for the comments on my work. I was just inspired to write the poem "Power" one morning from this glorious sunrise. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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February 14, 2010 at 8:30 AM
As the Mardi Gras prepares to open Tuesday, this awesome haiku can apply to that celebration as well, Gert. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
Hilliker Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 7:47 AM
Well written Haiku, Gert. It sound like a great, fun day.
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