Carnival

Crowded joyful streets People disguised show their dreams Carnival governs the day

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2010 12:58:00 PM

Oh, I like this one, Gert. I wish I could go to Carnival! And thanks for your kind comment on my REflections poem. Luv, andrea

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/16/2010 2:21:00 PM

Its Carnival Here in Malta too Gert..Lovely Haiku indeed..love the last verse...Recomment..You lived in Edinburgh--Its a wonderful place indeed,I visited Scotland many times,Yep i'm in love with it indeed..Cant stop going there..Regarding your Country its an awesome place too..tnks for stopping by:)Charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/14/2010 11:21:00 AM

Sounds like a fun day. Thanks for the comments on my work. I was just inspired to write the poem "Power" one morning from this glorious sunrise. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/14/2010 11:21:00 AM

sounds so fun, reminds me of the wistful days of youth!! And thanks for your comments.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2010 8:30:00 AM

As the Mardi Gras prepares to open Tuesday, this awesome haiku can apply to that celebration as well, Gert. Nice work! Love, Carolyn

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/14/2010 7:47:00 AM

Well written Haiku, Gert. It sound like a great, fun day.