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Careful What You Wish

Go on make a wish, for mine came true A sure thing, appeared out of the blue Make it a good one, could be your last Everything eventually, comes to pass Wish for happiness, wish for release Make sure it’s something, within reach You won’t be able, to resurrect the dead That would be a miracle, all being said Go on make a wish, do it straight away For who grants, these requests anyway Toss some coins, into a fountain or well Cross your fingers, to enhance the spell Touch wood, in case things turn to stone Break a chickens clavicle, old wishbone Seek shooting stars, find pie in the sky I wished my life away, time duly obliged. By David Kavanagh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/18/2021 2:10:00 PM
Love this David Re-read it over again and discovered a new depth and complexity. Wished my life away and time obliged Only then to wish for that time back
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/25/2021 5:01:00 PM
Ooops apologies David Called What you just said not #hat i wrote down
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/19/2021 12:33:00 PM
After reading this and your comment irote you a poem or should i say 1 dedicated to you Sir Its called shat you just said
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/18/2021 3:39:00 PM
You’ve certainly got meaning from this one Christopher, and I’m delighted if you get some inspiration, means I’ve done my job, now there’s something to be grateful for
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/18/2021 3:07:00 PM
So simple David Yet and but so inherently truthful Food , Water , Air and Love Everything else even a roof or house is a bonus Everything technically we need to be happy Is here within our grasp Except gratitude
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/18/2021 2:59:00 PM
Enjoy the silence, Depeche Mode, what a great lyric.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/18/2021 2:51:00 PM
All's i ever wanted All i ever needed Is here in my arms Wishes can sometimes do more harm than good
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/18/2021 2:51:00 PM
Enjoyed this 1 fella
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/18/2021 2:49:00 PM
I David Accept the thing's we cannot change Change the things we can And the wisdom to know the difference
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/18/2021 2:34:00 PM
And that indeed is the crux of this poem Christopher, Those damn wishes are hopes and dreams, we only have the here and now, and will never get it back, life ain’t perfect, who’s to say tomorrow will be any better, but it’s hard when on a downer, all we wish for is something better, life eh, cheers David
Date: 4/18/2021 12:20:00 PM
David, don't get me started on time. :) Time is the most valuable thing anyone can spend so enjoy it with what life brings. Great poem. Cheers - Gary
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/18/2021 12:33:00 PM
Thanks Gary it’s our greatest gift and enemy, I’m convinced it speeds up as we get older, when a kid it seemed endless days went on forever, enough said or I’ll be getting myself started, cheers David Reply
Date: 4/18/2021 11:52:00 AM
Hello David Kayanagh, I believe that things come to those that wait. Because it is coming slowly. Heave a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/19/2021 11:29:00 AM
Hello David Kayanagh, thank you. Oh I like these words. Right they should not hold their breath too long or life will pass them by. I am keeping well. i hope you are to. Enjoy your day my friend. Cheers Darlene
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/18/2021 12:07:00 PM
Wise words Darlene, we have a saying in Ireland, ‘If it’s for you it won’t pass you’, but I think it’s human nature for people to wish, but they shouldn’t hold their breath too long, or life will pass them by, hope your keeping well, cheers David
Date: 4/18/2021 11:04:00 AM
got to say i would be very careful what i wished for David! it could bring more trouble than it's worth! I am happy with my lot I have my health and hubby and son and want for nothing more:-) hugs jan xx
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/18/2021 11:15:00 AM
And that’s the message here Jan, you get it exactly, get on with life for it will pass you by if waiting for something to happen, I’m delighted you have found happiness, as have I, but sometimes life can drag me down in a spiral, that’s where poetry helps me climb back out, cheers David

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