Carefree Carousel

screams of pure joy laughing out loud 
jingling beauty bells in carnival crowd 
flying reigned horses, rattling on clouds
giggles on saddles, princes play proud.

chariot of happiness, innocence found 
anchored childhood, fun loops abound 
carefree calliopes , cymbals frolic sound
infinite pleasure, rides a merry go round

ornate ponies race, spiraling in spin
galloping magic dreams, unicorn within 
content in tandem, music ends to begin
cheerful together, no one to lose or win.



25th March 2020

Sponsor	Eve Roper
Contest Name	Carousel Picture Prompt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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April 8, 2020 at 12:26 AM
Congratulations on your win, Debjani, in Line's contest. Hugs Eve
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April 7, 2020 at 7:56 PM
Congratulations on your win,Debjani, with great imagery, rhyme and content. Thank you for entering my contest! Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2020 at 2:29 PM
oh you brought back those innocent days of childhood Debjani, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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April 7, 2020 at 9:42 AM
Debjani, this is a vividly descriptive, delightful WINNING poem! Janice
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April 7, 2020 at 4:14 AM
Congratulations on your win, Debjani. This was an excellent portrayal of the carefree fun of a merry-go-round and it brought back happy childhood memories.
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