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26th of the Omer corresponds to 26th Way of Learning Torah

Care in One's Words/Actions (???? ???? ?????) Silence in Deed, Doesn't Mislead, Not Lulling Other's Trust to Sleep, Appearances, Actions are Believed, Conform to Examinations 'Un-Deep', Surface 'What Is', Isn't Relieved, Carefree Talk Tolls are Steep. Stealing Minds by Impression, Can be as Severe as 'Gunpoints', Perhaps Worse, Guns are Confession, Gullibility Subtlely Anoints, At Mercy to Self Preconception, Likewise to Misleading 'Clip Joints"

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Date: 5/24/2019 4:23:00 PM
Chaim, please see your soup mail...Looks like we have been on the 'same wave length,' so to speak. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 5/19/2019 9:48:00 PM
Ditto as Same'ach b'Chelko. Love the first stanza. :) gw
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