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Care For Poor

I would crave to have that food 
I would Baith to have to food

Oh please oh please
Im Dying to have that food

My tummy is aching 
The baby is crying 

please oh please
may i have some food

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Trevor Marshall

Date: 4/28/2016 10:58:00 AM

No you may not! Ha Ha Ha still that's a good poem but remember that couplets are 3 stanzas and 4 lines per stanza.

Elliot Sutton
Date: 4/28/2016 10:59:00 AM

SHUT IT!!!! im poor :,C