Cardinals

Cardinals I saw the cardinals today Clad in ceremonial crimson red Tiara tufts above their heads. Silken sheen on satin capes, Looking down from lofty perch Of nest in apse of nearby church.

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Donna Jones

Date: 4/6/2014 7:42:00 AM

I love watching these majestic birds too...lovely poem...congratulations

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/6/2014 6:13:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win. I enjoyed the poem, john

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/6/2014 5:30:00 AM

Cute one! Congrats on your fine win!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/5/2014 8:35:00 PM

Wonderful descriptive verse, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Skat A

Date: 4/4/2014 9:16:00 PM

wonderful win, John..........SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2014 5:31:00 PM

Congratulations, John! Awesome verse... xox~ LINDA

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/4/2014 12:09:00 PM

great choice of words for a cardinals... well done, John!!! Congratulations on your big win for Andrea's Itty Bitty thingy... :o)) SALUTE!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2014 12:37:00 AM

Very intelligent writing here, John. I had to really think about it for a moment and I hope I got it right now!! Congrats for this gorgeous poem, 4th place.