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Cardinals

two male cardinals
fight over territory....
corn tassels rustle   


in an instant from the kitchen window view

naturehaiku

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Caren Krutsinger

August 11, 2021 at 10:23 AM

this appealed to me because I have cardinals, and I am from the corn state so thank you!

Shirley Candy

July 6, 2021 at 10:03 PM

Hi Sara.. What a lovely hatiku u wrote here. It made me want them on my backyard too..

Sara Kendrick

July 7, 2021 at 6:04 AM

Shirley, Thanks for the nice review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara

Judy Ball

June 28, 2021 at 10:29 AM

Lovely. I'd love to have the view from my own kitchen. God Bless, UJB

Sara Kendrick

June 30, 2021 at 12:31 PM

Judy, Well, maybe inside your heart you can or you could work on something to be similar. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Quoth Theraven

June 28, 2021 at 7:26 AM

Sara, An eye for detail in this rustling write. The cardinal search continues. -Richard

Sara Kendrick

June 28, 2021 at 7:35 AM

Richard, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

M. L. Kiser

June 27, 2021 at 8:36 PM

Oh this is beautiful, it provides a fantastic natural visual, am "fav'ing" it.

Sara Kendrick

June 28, 2021 at 7:35 AM

M.L., I am honored that your would fav this one. I haven't seen a red cardinal since that day. I guess one of them one the battled and settled into rearing his family in a nest out there. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

June 24, 2021 at 1:50 PM

Few words with much said. I love cardinals and your write. A pretty picture. Have a blessed day............................

Bj Legros Kelley

June 23, 2021 at 12:24 PM

Wow! Felt the flash of movement and color in this! We rarely see cardinals here! Love this!!

Sara Kendrick

June 23, 2021 at 4:20 PM

BJ, I am glad that you like it. We don't see them as much in the summer as in fall and early spring but that is because they have separated into family units and are nesting. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 22, 2021 at 7:00 AM

- The law of nature ... the strongest win ... lovely written, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

June 22, 2021 at 9:49 AM

Sunshine, It is hard to see a fight where one or the other gets injured or dies but this time it was only a short lived thing where one flees. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Beata Agustin

June 21, 2021 at 9:04 PM

Wow! Thanks for sharing this... including the photo. God bless you. Thanks for your uplifting comments.

Sara Kendrick

June 23, 2021 at 6:27 AM

Beata, I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks..Sara

Victor Buhagiar

June 20, 2021 at 12:50 PM

Pity you had no movie camera. It would have been fun.

Sara Kendrick

June 23, 2021 at 6:30 AM

Victor, Yes it would have been nice to record the activity but they were so swift that it would not have been possible. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

June 20, 2021 at 10:56 AM

GREAT haiku-ing, Sara!

Sara Kendrick

June 23, 2021 at 6:34 AM

Andrea, Thanks for dropping by and leaving an encouraging word. Sara

Heidi Sands

June 20, 2021 at 7:38 AM

Very nice Sara :)

Sara Kendrick

June 23, 2021 at 6:36 AM

Heidi, Thank you.. SK

Tom Cunningham

June 20, 2021 at 7:08 AM

Lovely nature scene Sara. Tom

Sara Kendrick

June 23, 2021 at 6:40 AM

Tom, Thanks for the review of this poem and my short story. I can only tell a story about what I know and from my perspective so the short story is true. Sara

Tom Cunningham

June 22, 2021 at 2:53 PM

Enjoyed your short story, you're a great story teller. Hope your week is going well.

Kim Merryman

June 20, 2021 at 7:02 AM

A beautiful haiku, Sara! Cardinals and Hummingbirds are my favorite birds! Blessings, Kim M

Sara Kendrick

June 20, 2021 at 7:14 AM

Kim, I don't see the cardinals as much in the summer because they are nesting but the other day one was chasing another one across the top of the corn tassels. LOL..Thanks for dropping by. Sara

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