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Cardinal Fancy

Dressed in bright red, standing proud Feathers flapping bright, magnificently loud Chirping, composing a love song Take notice, in a flash he'll be gone Happily feasting on seed all alone Brown feathers appear, she's at his throne

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Faye Gibson

Date: 3/29/2022 1:59:00 AM

This is lovely, just like the bird. They are so beautiful, especially against snow. Thank you for the placement in your contest.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/29/2022 2:13:00 PM

Thank you Faye and you're welcome!

Andrew John

Date: 1/26/2022 1:24:00 AM

Thank you. Good one!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/26/2022 4:34:00 AM

Thank you

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/21/2022 11:12:00 PM

Beautiful rhyme. Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/23/2022 4:25:00 AM

Thank you!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/20/2022 5:41:00 AM

Awesome imagery here, Tania:)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/20/2022 3:58:00 PM

Thank you Jo!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/17/2022 5:00:00 PM

Oh beautifully done, I can easily visualize them from the description.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/17/2022 6:46:00 PM

Thank you ML!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2022 12:25:00 PM

what wonderful imagery Tania, I would love to see one for real:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/16/2022 2:25:00 PM

Thank you Jan, they are beautiful birds and striking to see in the winter next to the white snow! hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/16/2022 1:05:00 AM

Cardinals are beautiful birds. Great imagery in your bit size poe. Best for a win.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/16/2022 4:10:00 AM

Thank you Victor! hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/15/2022 1:11:00 PM

You captured those beautiful birds well in a few lines Tania. Hope your weekend is going well Tom

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2022 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Tom!