Cardinal Fancy

Dressed in bright red, standing proud
Feathers flapping bright, magnificently loud
Chirping, composing a love song
Take notice, in a flash he'll be gone
Happily feasting on seed all alone 
Brown feathers appear, she's at his throne
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gibson Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 1:59 AM
This is lovely, just like the bird. They are so beautiful, especially against snow. Thank you for the placement in your contest.
Kitchin Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 2:13 PM
Thank you Faye and you're welcome!
John Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 1:24 AM
Thank you. Good one!
Kitchin Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 4:34 AM
Thank you
Alex Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 11:12 PM
Beautiful rhyme. Congratulations!
Kitchin Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 4:25 AM
Thank you!
Daniel Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Awesome imagery here, Tania:)
Kitchin Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 3:58 PM
Thank you Jo!
Kiser Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 5:00 PM
Oh beautifully done, I can easily visualize them from the description.
Kitchin Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 6:46 PM
Thank you ML!
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 12:25 PM
what wonderful imagery Tania, I would love to see one for real:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Jan, they are beautiful birds and striking to see in the winter next to the white snow! hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 1:05 AM
Cardinals are beautiful birds. Great imagery in your bit size poe. Best for a win.
Kitchin Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 4:10 AM
Thank you Victor! hugs
Cunningham Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 1:11 PM
You captured those beautiful birds well in a few lines Tania. Hope your weekend is going well Tom
Kitchin Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 2:15 PM
Thank you Tom!
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