Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

Cardinal

As my father spoke of wanting a sign that my mom is with us…

CARDINAL

red feathers fly by
stirring cardinal’s syrinx ~
a soar melody

8/16/2021
Songbird haiku
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
HMS 575

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Howard Kerr August 24, 2021 at 12:41 AM Kim, This is a wonderful Haiku deserving of every award. Congratulations. Thanks for your two soupmails regarding my entry Howard Kim Rodrigues August 24, 2021 at 5:20 AM Thank you, Howard!

Malabika Ray Choudhury August 23, 2021 at 3:46 PM Congratulations, Kim. Creative haiku, My Friend. Love ~ Mala Kim Rodrigues August 24, 2021 at 5:20 AM Thank you, Mala! :)

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2021 at 3:21 PM Beautiful, Kim. Congratulations. Kim Rodrigues August 24, 2021 at 5:20 AM Thank you, Andrea!

Sam Kauffman August 23, 2021 at 9:57 AM Wonderful glimpse of red wings and a hint of song, Kim. So descriptive. So creative. Congratulations on your win! Kim Rodrigues August 23, 2021 at 1:32 PM Thank you, Sam!

Rama Balasubramanian August 23, 2021 at 7:32 AM Beautiful! Congratulations. Hope all is well with you Kim Rodrigues August 23, 2021 at 8:38 AM Thank you, Rama! Have a wonderful day!

Tania Kitchin August 23, 2021 at 5:24 AM Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku! Kim Rodrigues August 23, 2021 at 5:30 AM Thank you, Tania!

Anitha Jayasankar August 18, 2021 at 1:42 AM This is lovely... a beautiful sign... best wishes in the contest dear Kim... Hugs... ~ Ani Kim Rodrigues August 18, 2021 at 4:25 AM Thank you sweet Anitha!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2021 at 5:46 AM - Beautifully written, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2021 at 6:06 AM Thank you, my friend!

Sotto Poet August 16, 2021 at 5:20 PM Lovely Haiku, Kim, may your mom rest in peace, It's amazing how faithful your dad is; god blesses the family. Best wishes with the contest. Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2021 at 5:10 AM Thank you, sweet friend!

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2021 at 3:06 PM a beautiful KU on a most beautiful SIGN! Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2021 at 4:01 PM Thank you, sweet friend! :)

JC Brul August 16, 2021 at 9:52 AM Superb haiku! Well-executed with brilliant lines! Best luck in the contest. Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2021 at 11:00 AM Thank you, JCB

Caren Krutsinger August 16, 2021 at 8:49 AM One of my favorite birds; so I thank you Kim. Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2021 at 11:00 AM Thank you too, Caren!

Tom Cunningham August 16, 2021 at 8:48 AM She's never far from you Kim. Tom Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2021 at 11:00 AM You are right, Tom! Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar August 16, 2021 at 7:58 AM Lovely haiku. I pray for help to God and my wife. I am heard. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2021 at 10:59 AM :)