Cardinal

As my father spoke of wanting a sign that my mom is with us… CARDINAL red feathers fly by stirring cardinal’s syrinx ~ a soar melody 8/16/2021 Songbird haiku Sponsor: Tania Kitchin HMS 575

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Howard Kerr

Date: 8/24/2021 12:41:00 AM

Kim, This is a wonderful Haiku deserving of every award. Congratulations. Thanks for your two soupmails regarding my entry Howard

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2021 5:20:00 AM

Thank you, Howard!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/23/2021 3:46:00 PM

Congratulations, Kim. Creative haiku, My Friend. Love ~ Mala

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2021 5:20:00 AM

Thank you, Mala! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2021 3:21:00 PM

Beautiful, Kim. Congratulations.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2021 5:20:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/23/2021 9:57:00 AM

Wonderful glimpse of red wings and a hint of song, Kim. So descriptive. So creative. Congratulations on your win!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2021 1:32:00 PM

Thank you, Sam!

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/23/2021 7:32:00 AM

Beautiful! Congratulations. Hope all is well with you

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2021 8:38:00 AM

Thank you, Rama! Have a wonderful day!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/23/2021 5:24:00 AM

Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2021 5:30:00 AM

Thank you, Tania!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/18/2021 1:42:00 AM

This is lovely... a beautiful sign... best wishes in the contest dear Kim... Hugs... ~ Ani

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2021 4:25:00 AM

Thank you sweet Anitha!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2021 5:46:00 AM

- Beautifully written, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2021 6:06:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/16/2021 5:20:00 PM

Lovely Haiku, Kim, may your mom rest in peace, It's amazing how faithful your dad is; god blesses the family. Best wishes with the contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2021 5:10:00 AM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2021 3:06:00 PM

a beautiful KU on a most beautiful SIGN!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2021 4:01:00 PM

Thank you, sweet friend! :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/16/2021 9:52:00 AM

Superb haiku! Well-executed with brilliant lines! Best luck in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2021 11:00:00 AM

Thank you, JCB

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/16/2021 8:49:00 AM

One of my favorite birds; so I thank you Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2021 11:00:00 AM

Thank you too, Caren!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/16/2021 8:48:00 AM

She's never far from you Kim. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2021 11:00:00 AM

You are right, Tom! Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/16/2021 7:58:00 AM

Lovely haiku. I pray for help to God and my wife. I am heard. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2021 10:59:00 AM