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CARD MAGIC

The deck of cards seemed alive in my hands.
I loved the whisper of shuffling, and
the way kings and queens stared back,
their faces older than anything I knew.

I built castles from fanned-out suits,
believing they could hold real wishes.
Every card I turned felt like a doorway~
a little spell I was certain I had cast.

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Wolf Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 8:01 PM
Sara in Wonderland ~ the Cheshire Cat
Rodgers Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 9:00 AM
Dear Sara, this feels like slipping back into a childhood moment you didn’t realize you’d kept. The way you describe those cards, almost breathing, almost listening, pulls up that old sense of possibility we forget we once trusted. Such a gentle spell in the way you tell it. Blessings, Daniel
Gauthier Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 7:51 AM
delightful way to capture the magic of cards seen through the eyes of a child ~ come to think of it, it did seem like a rite of passage.
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