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Car Washed

Danny has a mobile Car wash business, Saves some money From paying a rent. Born in Nicaragua A believer, We Talked about God While his crew Speedily washed My 2006 Scion xA. Discussing humility, Danny told a story about a Lady He knew who died and came Back to life. She saw the light At the end of the Tunnel. An Archangel Greeted her and explained We are all Angels originally Sent from Heaven to earth With a mission. Memories of our heavenly existence Erased to perform without slack. At the end, Danny charged 18 bucks for wash my car… …That was his mission.

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 11/2/2008 5:02:00 PM

This is an interesting poem. Wow, eighteen bucks, that's a little steep. I normally pay five bucks and I am complaining while turning over the cash, and asking for my military discount at the same time. I love the storyline. The message is excellent. Great job! ~Joseph

Date: 7/24/2008 11:38:00 AM

Inspirational poem with a touch of humor for good reading. It's important to carry God with us in our every day lives. This is a nice reminder of that. Blessings to you for sharing this creative poem with us. Thank you for your kind words regarding "blowing..." Keep on writing! Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/24/2008 11:04:00 AM

Dear Jaime, funny ending. Well, that is an interesting concept. Certainly must have made your car wash a most unusual experience. I wonder what my mission is? : ) Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/23/2008 7:03:00 PM

Well I reckon we all have a little angel with-in us - I do hope when i make it past that bright lite you'll be there - blessings always

James Foulk

Date: 7/23/2008 12:27:00 PM

once you die, and go to heaven no one comes back. who would want to come back to earth, when you have heaven. but this was a well wrote piece of poetry.