Captured Vision

Shiny pink colored lips, parted so slight.
Warm, soft exhales,  recognized on a cold winters night.
While traces of silver glitter dance and dart with moons glow,
the moment of this captured vision, a mere second, yet slow.
The smallest of details only noticed by you,
forever remaining within the heart, and your mind too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ligon Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 11:02 PM
Beautiful vision. Nice emphasis on the details.
Brenner Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 3:58 AM
I'm sorry Juliet..slow reply..I'm a "duh"..sometimes..ty so much for your expressed comment..I value opinions and am grateful I recieve them..again thankyou..Bless u always.
Barden Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:55 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Brian's contest, Kenneth - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o)
Brenner Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 9:08 PM
Thankyou Gregory, thanku much..God Bless you always my friend.
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