Captive Bird - 12 Bars 12 Dreams

12 BARS

Twelve  brazen bars, one frozen lock!
Confined, sublime, an ancient Roc
endures inside a barren cage,
her catacomb in sundown sage.

Of former days there is no trace
except displays of fallen grace –
Twelve dreams, abiding in her place,
are free, inhabit yawning space:

                   12 DREAMS
 
... of wings unfurled, and seething eyes
that dredge the depths of dawning skies,
divining clouds that cling below,
once ice, dissolved in morning’s glow;

... of clutching winds that carry free
above an anguished leaden sea,
dispersing dust of distant stars
midst chunks of chain in slave bazaars;

... of swooping to a silent shore
to perch beside the ocean’s roar,
at last to feel the sobbing breeze
message the leaves of rooted trees;

... of stalking strays and twilight tramps
within the fog of lighthouse lamps
that blink forlorn through caldron nights
in search of shades of errant Kites;

... of darkling vast deserted lands,
with shadowed stones on windswept sands,
where ghosts of Moorish maidens lost
disgorge faint groans in mourning frost;

... of blotting out the bloated moon
while feathers beat a banshee tune
and glimmers dance and prance aglow 
upon a pearly pale plateau;

... of tasting cool torrential rains,
beyond the realm of binding reins,
and	 sipping freedom they exude
in quiet drops of solitude;

... of vanquishing a galley crew
aboard a ship of midnight dew,
beneath the pierce of seagulls' screams
that mock the strands of scarlet streams;

... of sating once an aching craw
with tearing beak, with ripping claw,
and echoed by an eldritch screech
while feasting on abandoned beach;

... of restive thoughts and weary wings
that drift on haze in smoky rings,
obscured within the opal shroud
of her resemblance in the crowd;

... of croaking caws in broken rhyme
in winter woe, in summer clime,
while building nests of sundown sage
beyond outside a barren cage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A  Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 3:50 AM
Terry, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
Delaney Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations, Terry...... on your top placement. A beautiful flow in your words. SuZ
Kimathi Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 10:53 PM
Hi Terry. Congrats for your #1 placement in the contest! ;-)
A. Sharma Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 10:51 PM
Congrats on a deserved top spot win with this amazing write Terry!
Sietesantos Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Congratulations on walking away with the top spot in this contest! I enjoyed reading this wonderful piece! A-7 for sure! Pandita
Lawless Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 3:28 PM
Congrats on the top spot Terry. Well written with rhythm and pace a smooth flowing and enjoyable read
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 11:46 PM
TERRY, Congratulations -- This is a great way to end and start the new year, having your poem featured on the soups front page. Hope your Christmas was a merry one! Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 4:17 AM
I love this poem. Great work. Trying to get through the list you sent me. I can't find the "Fantasy" poem though.
Allen Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 1:07 PM
Makes one feel pity for the bird. Very discriptive. Huggs TLee
A   Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 10:02 PM
HI,,TERRY, still congratulating all my sisters past contest. . Now I'm on the poets favorite poem contest.. I'm actually amazed with all these poems. I see why they are chosen as a favorite poem by other poets...a Super Congratulations here. I think I agreed with all the winners in this contest... love~PD
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on your win in SKAT's "Members Favorite Poem" contest Terry. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 4:56 AM
Terry a belated congrats on your win.really clever...David
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 11:36 PM
Oh, and CONGRATS
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 11:35 PM
Hey,. Terry, which contest did this win in? I finally am seeing it. You have excellent meter in your poetry!!
May Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 5:44 PM
very nice Terry...congrats on your win
Rozario Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Very nice Terry...congrats on your win!!!
Taylor Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 9:06 AM
Congrats, Terry. Awesome. Enjoyed. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph
Kearley Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 10:59 PM
Wow! Such an excellent flow...And all the different words you used are awesome!!! I'm going to make it a Fav...
Grisetti Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 8:53 PM
Love all the variety of images - you have vivid dreams indeed.
Guzzi Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Quite a feate and excellent meter..one verse to read over and over..almost a lullabye? Most excellent fav verse [Of blotting out the bloated moon] Light & Love
Cohan Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 9:22 AM
so a stranger comments on a poem I wrote...and so i read a few of HIS and am humbled....the structure, subject matter and execution OD THIS PIECE are all to perfection...thanks for commenting on me so i could find another great poet..yours in peace, pain, poetry, protection and per chance your perfection (the universe knows ain't 'nothin perfect 'bout me but for my imperfections) PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~I JUST wish you would read a few of my other poems besides the one that is counter-intuitive to the jubject matter i usually delve into, like yesterday and today's...thanks again bro! ~f!~
Horne Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 11:09 AM
love this wonderful write, Terry. I agree with Elizabeth's comments
Wesley Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 11:40 AM
Enchanting poetry, takes me places I need to be! A 10, a fave and everything else I can say to let you know how much I appreciate your brilliance! Luv, Lizzie
Andresen Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Nicely written, a unique written poem Terry. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Collins Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 6:02 AM
Dear Terry, You wind your words round the would-be bird sweeter than a warbler in the bushes. Everything is perfect, your rhyme, your deliciously descriptive language. All of it quotable. Here's my favorite, I think... Of stalking trails of twilight tramps, Within the fog of lighthouse lamps That blink forlorn through caldron nights, In search of shades of errant Kites; Poetic heaven. love, Kathy
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